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Wednesday 18 March 2020

Summary of I am David

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  1. Hi Akesa! It's Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I really liked your summary, it made me really want to read the book, which hopefully I might. I also like the cover of the book, it looks very interesting as well.

    I've read a book called 'The Boy In The Striped Pajamas' it was a book a bit similar to the type of the book that you are reading. What is your favorite part of the book so far?

    To improve, maybe you could try to make this stand out more by using a drawing, or a Canva, or something else creative that you can think of! Also re-read your writing, there are a couple grammar errors and places for punctuation.

    Great work!
    Mia

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