For this activity, let’s imagine that you were Neil Armstrong.
On your blog, write a short poem describing how you felt when you first set foot on the moon. Here is a link to some different poetry forms.
POEM
Scared & Excited ,
Still anxious if I might fall,
But I'm still in love.
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ReplyDeleteHi Akesa,
ReplyDeleteIts me Christopher. Your poem is great.
Also I can tell that its a haiku because last year I always did haikus as my poem.
But what are you scared about?
If you fall off the moon you will be floating.
Besides that you are doing great! Have a great holiday!
Malo Aupito
Christopher
Hey Akesa,
ReplyDeleteWooho, it’s Friday! Is today your last day of school? If it is, you must be so excited that you are finally done for the year. How are you going to celebrate finishing school?
I really like how you have done a Haiku. For those of you who don’t know Haiku originated from Japan. It also consists of 3 lines and then the 5, 7, 5 process (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables).
You did an awesome job of your Haiku! I agree with Chris, I would like to know what you are scared of? Is it being away from the Earth? Let me know!
Nga mihi,
Georgia